临江仙 庭院深深深几许

2016-08-15 00:00

看来你的词填好后都没有检测<BR> 原词校验结果：&nbsp;本词格例词（作者　贺铸）：<BR> 庭院深深深几许。<BR> 中中中中平中仄句</P><P> 幽灯影暗无声。（韵部错误，本字属庚韵，）<BR> 平平中仄平平韻</P><P> 为谁憔悴添银丝。（韵部错误，本字属支韵，）<BR> 中平中仄仄平平韻</P><P> 夜来寂冷时。<BR> 仄平中仄仄句</P><P> 暂享小清悠。（韵部错误，本字属尤韵，）<BR> 中仄仄平平韻</P><P> 　</P><P> 欲折梅上花一枝。<BR> 中中中中平中仄句</P><P> 天涯何人堪寄。<BR> 中平平仄平平韻</P><P> 感月吟风多少事。<BR> 中平中仄仄平平韻</P><P> 叹人渐老去。<BR> 中平中仄仄句</P><P> 噫情怀如水。<BR> 中仄仄平平韻

2016-08-14 00:00

<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;color:#EE33EE;">临江仙，“钦定词谱”有12种体式，不知您用的是哪一种？——最常用的是欧阳修体：</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">临江仙</span></b><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">&nbsp; </span></b><b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">双调六十字，前后阕各三平韵，一韵到底。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;"> </span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;<b>&nbsp;</b></span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">欧阳修<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">柳外轻雷池上雨</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">，雨声滴碎荷声</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。小楼西角断虹明</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。阑干私倚处</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">，遥见月华生</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。<span><br /> </span></span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎●◎○○●●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">，<span>&nbsp; ◎○◎●○△</span>。 <span>◎○◎●●○△</span>。<span>&nbsp; ◎○○●●</span>， <span>◎●●○△</span>。<span></span></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">燕子飞来窥画栋</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">，玉钩垂下帘旌</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。凉波不动簟纹平</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。水晶双枕畔</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">， 犹有堕钗横</span></b><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">。<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎●◎○○●●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">， &nbsp;<span>◎○◎●○△</span>。 <span>◎○◎●●○△</span>。<span>&nbsp; ◎○○●●</span>，<span>&nbsp; &nbsp;◎●●○△</span>。<span></span></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:24px;font-family:宋体;color:#E53333;"><strong>——您的谱不对，韵也不对。</strong></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;"></span> </p>