12号紫轩-古韵学习练习帖

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12号-古韵学习练习帖

   

学员须知

1.  本练习帖是12号学员的专用练习帖。非本人请不要在此跟帖;学员本人也不能在此述说与学习内容无关的问题;

2.  学员应尽快(最晚在下一课次之前)完成每课次布置的练习(思考题不必书面写出)。也可以在练习之后提出有关学习内容的疑问,批阅后将予以解答。练习是自己的学习历程的原始记录,最好自己拷贝留底

3.  每课次的练习应得分是10分,教员评阅后給予实得记分。实得分0~10分。按“实得分/应得分”分别进行累计,评阅后以表格附在末尾。

4.  为方便批阅,应将学习资料中练习题的原题目复制到此练习本上。练习请编辑到最小“18px”号字,颜色用黑色或蓝色。批阅用红色或粉色,以醒目区分。

5. 学员报名后,希望坚持学习,不因特殊情况希望尽量不要中间退出。

(非练习本人请不要在此跟贴!)

留言区(共25条)

2016-11-13 00:00
练习5<BR> &#160;(尽量按工对完成下面对句)<BR> 1.出句:春色暖人间&nbsp;(要求对上句,写成上仄收下平收的标准形式)<BR> 上句:艳阳照大地&nbsp;<BR> 2.出句:窗明几净梅花影&#160;&nbsp;(注意:“几”是“茶几”的几,名词)<BR> 上句:霞蔚云蒸旭日升&nbsp;<BR> 3.出句:雨过天晴云万里<BR> 上句:风来清爽月三更&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 4.出句:小池映月亭前柳<BR> 上句:篱笆缠藤院后花<BR> 5.出句:蝉鸣蛙鼓荷塘月<BR> 上句:月落松涛燕岭风
2016-11-13 00:00
辛苦老师!谢谢你的点评!
2016-11-13 00:00
<span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>练习5</strong></span><br /> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>&nbsp;;(尽量按工对完成下面对句)</strong></span><br /> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>1.</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>出句:春色暖人间&nbsp;(要求对上句,写成上仄收下平收的标准形式)</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>上句:艳阳照大地 &nbsp;<span style="color:#E53333;">——你这是 10111 ,能行吗?你去核对格律吧!而且“艳”也不行。请再复习资料。</span></strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;color:#E53333;"><strong>下句:春色暖人间 &nbsp;——加上下句,才是标准形式。&nbsp;</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>2.</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>出句:窗明几净梅花影&nbsp;;&nbsp;(注意:“几”是“茶几”的几,名词)</strong></span> </p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>上句:霞蔚云蒸旭日升 &nbsp;<span style="color:#E53333;">——上面是“出句”,下面就应是“对句”。“梅花的影子”,“影”是名词。“升”是动词啊!“旭”也不合适。</span></strong></span><br /> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>3.</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>出句:雨过天晴云万里</strong></span> </p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">上句</span>:风来清爽月三更 &nbsp;<span style="color:#E53333;">——“天晴”是“名.动”,“清爽”怎么能对呢?</span></strong></span><br /> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>4.</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>出句:小池映月亭前柳</strong></span> </p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">上句</span>:篱笆缠藤院后花 <span style="color:#E53333;">——“笆”是平声啦!“小”是形容词,“小池/篱笆”不行。</span></strong></span><br /> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>5.</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong>出句:蝉鸣蛙鼓荷塘月</strong></span> </p> <span style="font-family:宋体;font-size:18px;line-height:30px;"><strong><span style="color:#E53333;">上句:</span>月落松涛燕岭风 <span style="color:#E53333;">——对句不能再用“月”字,“松涛”是偏正词,“蛙鼓”是名动主谓结构短语。</span></strong></span><br />
2016-11-11 00:00
3.应对:荷花湖畔柳丝长<BR> (这是出的下句,要你对上句。须写成标准形式如下。)<BR> 对句:&nbsp;小麦田边青草少&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(按*1#0011)&nbsp;<BR> 出句:荷花湖畔柳丝长&nbsp;&nbsp;(0001100)<BR> (提示:把“荷花湖”当成一个偏正短语来对待。)<BR> 4.应对<BR> 出句:窗含翠岭山萦雾&nbsp;&nbsp;(0011001)<BR> 对句:雨洒枫树叶落根&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(按1100110)<BR> 对句:&nbsp;风戏褐衣人舞欢&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(按*110010)<BR> -&nbsp;[&nbsp;]&nbsp;(萦:萦绕,动词;对句时注意“翠”是颜色形容词。要用颜色形容词来对。例如“红、黄、蓝、青、灰、紫、褐、绛”等字。熟悉入声字的学员,可以用入声字为仄声如:白、黑等)
2016-11-11 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">3.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">应对:荷花湖畔柳丝长</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(这是出的下句,要你对上句。须写成标准形式如下。)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对句:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">小麦田边青草少</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(按</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">*1#0011</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——“小麦”不行,“麦垄”可以;“青草”不行,“荆棘”可以。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">出句:荷花湖畔柳丝长</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0001100</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(提示:把“荷花湖”当成一个偏正短语来对待。)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 4.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">应对</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">出句:窗含翠岭山萦雾</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0011001</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对句:雨洒</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">枫</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">树叶落根</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(按</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1100110</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对句:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">风戏褐衣人舞欢</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(按</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">*110010</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> -</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(萦:萦绕,动词;对句时注意</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">“翠”是颜色形容词。要用颜色形容词来对。例如</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">“红、黄、蓝、青、灰、紫、褐、绛”等字。熟悉入声字的学员,可以用入声字为仄声如:白、黑等)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">&nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> <table class="MsoNormalTable ke-zeroborder" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" style="border-collapse:collapse;"> <tbody> <tr> <td width="85" rowspan="2" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">12</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">号</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">学员</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">上次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="174" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">第四次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">累积得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> <tr> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">21/20</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="174" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">5/10</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">26/30</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p>
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<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">练习</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">4</span><br /> </b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">一</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">请问下面五言律句式的对联:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 1.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">布谷迎春叫</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">牵牛引富来</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">11001/00110</span><br /> 2.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">丑时春入户</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">牛岁富临门</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">10011/01100</span><br /> 3.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">欢度新春日</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">高歌小放牛</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">01001/00110</span><br /> 4.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">黄牛耕绿野</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">猛虎啸青山</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">00011/11100</span><br /> 5.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">莺舞池边柳</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">鹊飞院外田</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">01001/10110</span><br /> 6.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">芳草水牛卧</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">古松仙鹤栖</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">01101/10010</span><br /> 7.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">牵牛花报喜</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">布谷鸟催春</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">00011/11100</span><br /> 8.</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">燕翔芳草地</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">牛启艳阳天</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">10011/01100</span><br /> </b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于第一种(平起)式的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">2478&nbsp;<br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于第二种(仄起)式的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1356&nbsp; </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——对。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于正格的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">147</span><br /> </b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于变格的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">23568</span> </b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——对。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">二、指出下面对联的问题:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">①</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">花开江左白雪尽</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">春到人间黄牛忙</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span>0001011/0100000&nbsp;&nbsp;</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">下联三平尾</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——还有“雪”、“黄牛”三字出律!</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">②</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">犬吠柴门鸡伴唱</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">莺鸣垂柳燕穿虹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 1000011/0001000&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">下联三平尾</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;">“燕”是仄声,没有三平尾;“柴、垂”,“唱、虹”词性不同</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">③</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">山外斜阳湖外雪</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">窗前流水枕边书</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 0100011/0001100&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">下联三平尾</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">有重字</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——你标了“</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">100</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">”,怎么还有三平尾呢?</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;">“斜、流”词性不同;“边”应改为“前”或者“前”改为“边”,同边同位重字就允许了。<span><br /> </span></span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">④</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">山含暖气千林翠</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">园啭莺声万花荣</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 0011001/1100100&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">下联第六字应为仄声</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——对,应修改说“</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;">花</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">”</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;">出律,可改为“树”;另外“暖、莺”词性不同;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;"> <span><br /> </span>——你还是仔细不够啊!</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p>
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谢谢老师!
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练习4<BR> 一&nbsp;请问下面五言律句式的对联:<BR> 1.布谷迎春叫/牵牛引富来11001/00110<BR> 2.丑时春入户/牛岁富临门10011/01100<BR> 3.欢度新春日/高歌小放牛01001/00110<BR> 4.黄牛耕绿野/猛虎啸青山00011/11100<BR> 5.莺舞池边柳/鹊飞院外田01001/10110<BR> 6.芳草水牛卧/古松仙鹤栖01101/10010<BR> 7.牵牛花报喜/布谷鸟催春00011/11100<BR> 8.燕翔芳草地/牛启艳阳天10011/01100<BR> 属于第一种(平起)式的是2478&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于第二种(仄起)式的是1356&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于正格的是147<BR> 属于变格的是23568<BR> 二、指出下面对联的问题:<BR> ①.花开江左白雪尽/春到人间黄牛忙&nbsp;<BR> 0001011/0100000&nbsp;&nbsp;下联三平尾<BR> ②.犬吠柴门鸡伴唱/莺鸣垂柳燕穿虹<BR> 1000011/0001000&nbsp;下联三平尾<BR> ③.山外斜阳湖外雪/窗前流水枕边书<BR> 0100011/0001100&nbsp;下联三平尾&nbsp;&nbsp;有重字<BR> ④.山含暖气千林翠/园啭莺声万花荣<BR> 0011001/1100100&nbsp;下联第六字应为仄声
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<p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">出句:山前岭后风梳柳<span>&nbsp;</span></span></b><b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对句:木断桥连月照人<span>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>(平起正格)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——前后是方向名词,要用方向名词来应对。“断、连”都是动词,不能对“前、后”。方向名词,例如:(仄)上、下、左、右、里、外、内、畔……;(平)边、沿、中、旁、……。</span></b><span style="color:#339966;"></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">你复习一下网校版上的“简要汉语语法知识”吧!</span></b><span style="color:#339966;"></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:#339966;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;">出句:山前岭后风梳柳<span>&nbsp;<br /> </span>对句:雨纵雾横光照路<span>&nbsp;</span>(平起变格)<span style="color:red;">——你看我上面怎么跟你说的,用方向名词来对“前、后”,“纵、横”哪是方向名词呢?</span></span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;">3.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;">将下面出句按:仄起正格和仄起变格两种要求各对一句。<span><br /> </span>出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<span><br /> </span>对句:荷花水上雨浇蛙<span>&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>(仄起正格)<span><br /> </span>出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<span><br /> </span>对句:白云山涧霞穿林<span>&nbsp;&nbsp;</span>(仄起变格)<span style="color:red;">——“涧”不是方向名词,用“间”可以;“霞”出律!<span></span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;"></span></b> </p>
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出句:山前岭后风梳柳&nbsp;<BR> 对句:雨纵雾横光照路&nbsp;(平起变格)<BR> 3.&nbsp;将下面出句按:仄起正格和仄起变格两种要求各对一句。<BR> 出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<BR> 对句:荷花水上雨浇蛙&nbsp;&nbsp;(仄起正格)<BR> 出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<BR> 对句:白云山涧霞穿林&nbsp;&nbsp;(仄起变格)</P><P> 辛苦老师把这几个练习也给指导点评,谢谢!<BR>
2016-11-04 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">试分析如下对联五要素中的“词性相当,结构相称”这一条是如何体现的:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 1.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">寂月眠云榻</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">孤松对水帘。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">寂月</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">孤松——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">-</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">名词(主语)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">形容词修正的偏正短语</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">眠</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">-</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">动词(谓语)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">云榻</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">水帘——名词(宾语)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">名词修正的偏正短语</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">音律:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">212/212</span><br /> 2.&nbsp;</b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">红杏枝头春意闹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乌衣巷口晚霞暄</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">红杏</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乌衣——颜色</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">名词</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">形容词修正的偏正短语;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">枝头</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">巷口——名词</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">方位名词偏正短语(地点状语);</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">红杏枝头</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乌衣巷口——主语</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">春意</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">晚霞——时令名词</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">宾语</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">(时间名词修正的)偏正短语(主语);<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">闹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">暄——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">-</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">动词</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">谓语</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">音律:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——<span>2221/2221</span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">红杏枝头</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">春意</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">闹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">//</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乌衣巷口</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">晚霞</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">暄</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 3.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">厚地高天,堪叹古今情不尽</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">//</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">痴男怨女,可怜风月债难酬</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">音律:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">厚地高天,堪叹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">古今</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">情</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">不尽</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">//</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">痴男怨女,可怜</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">风月</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">债</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">难酬</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">厚地高天<span>/</span>痴男怨女——偏正结构的联合短语;<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:24pt;text-indent:-24pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">堪叹<span>/</span>可怜——动词偏正短语;<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:24pt;text-indent:-24pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">古今情<span>/</span>风月债——名词并列结构修饰的偏正短语;<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:24pt;text-indent:-24pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">不尽<span>/</span>难酬——能愿动词与动词组成的偏正短语<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">音律节奏都是:<span>22 2212 </span>(或<span>232</span>)<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> <table class="MsoNormalTable ke-zeroborder" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" style="border-collapse:collapse;"> <tbody> <tr> <td width="103" rowspan="2" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">12</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">号</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">学员</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">上次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">第二次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">累积得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> <tr> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">9/10</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">7/20</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">16/20</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:18pt;text-indent:-18pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;"></span></b> </p>
2016-11-04 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">第三课练习题:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 1.&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">请问下面</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">8</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">幅七言律句式的对联中:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">①</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">天连五岭银锄落</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">地动三河铁臂摇</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">②</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">梦里依稀慈母泪</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">城头变幻大王旗</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">③</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乾坤日月祥光照</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">龙虎风云瑞气生</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">④</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">水如碧玉山如黛</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">露似珍珠月似弓</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">⑤</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">正是风轻荷媚处</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">恰逢花好月圆时</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">⑥</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">庙内无僧风扫地</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">寺中有客月临庭</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">⑦</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">千年古树当衣架</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">万里长江作浴盆</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">⑧</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">.</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">好古不求秦以下</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">游心常在物之初</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于第一种(平起)式的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1347&nbsp;<br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于第二种(仄起)式的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">2568&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——对</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于正格的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1356&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">356</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">都是变格</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">属于变格的是</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;2478&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">48</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">是变格,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">27</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">是正格</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">补充</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;2.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">将下面出句按:平起正格和平起变格两种要求各对一句。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">出句:山前岭后风梳柳</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span><br /> </b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">对句:木断桥连月照人</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">(平起正格)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——前后是方向名词,要用方向名词来应对。“断、连”都是动词,不能对“前、后”。方向名词,例如:(仄)上、下、左、右、里、外、内、畔……;(平)边、沿、中、旁、……</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">你复习一下网校版上的“简要汉语语法知识”吧!</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:#FFCC99;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;"></span></b> </p> <table class="MsoNormalTable ke-zeroborder" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" style="border-collapse:collapse;"> <tbody> <tr> <td width="85" rowspan="2" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">12</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">号</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">学员</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">上次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="174" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">第三次得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">累积得分</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> <tr> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">16/10</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="174" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">5/20</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">21/30</span></b><span style="font-size:12pt;font-family:宋体;"></span> </p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:#FFCC99;"></span></b> </p>
2016-11-01 00:00
练习修改:<BR> 2、<BR> 出句:山前岭后风梳柳&nbsp;<BR> 对句:雨纵雾横光照路&nbsp;(平起变格)
2016-11-01 00:00
第三课练习题:<BR> 1.&nbsp;&nbsp;请问下面8幅七言律句式的对联中:<BR> ①.天连五岭银锄落/地动三河铁臂摇<BR> ②.梦里依稀慈母泪/城头变幻大王旗<BR> ③.乾坤日月祥光照/龙虎风云瑞气生<BR> ④.水如碧玉山如黛/露似珍珠月似弓<BR> ⑤.正是风轻荷媚处/恰逢花好月圆时<BR> ⑥.庙内无僧风扫地/寺中有客月临庭<BR> ⑦.千年古树当衣架/万里长江作浴盆<BR> ⑧.好古不求秦以下/游心常在物之初<BR> 属于第一种(平起)式的是1347&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于第二种(仄起)式的是2568&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于正格的是1356&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于变格的是&nbsp;2478&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</P><P> 2.&nbsp;将下面出句按:平起正格和平起变格两种要求各对一句。<BR> 出句:山前岭后风梳柳&nbsp;<BR> 对句:&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(平起正格)<BR> 出句:山前岭后风梳柳&nbsp;<BR> 对句:&nbsp;雨纵雾横灯引路&nbsp;(平起变格)<BR> 3.&nbsp;将下面出句按:仄起正格和仄起变格两种要求各对一句。<BR> 出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<BR> 对句:荷花水上雨浇蛙&nbsp;&nbsp;(仄起正格)<BR> 出句:柳叶湖边风送燕<BR> 对句:白云山涧霞穿林&nbsp;&nbsp;(仄起变格)
2016-11-01 00:00
&nbsp;第三课练习题:<BR> 1.&nbsp;&nbsp;请问下面8幅七言律句式的对联中:<BR> ①.天连五岭银锄落/地动三河铁臂摇<BR> ②.梦里依稀慈母泪/城头变幻大王旗<BR> ③.乾坤日月祥光照/龙虎风云瑞气生<BR> ④.水如碧玉山如黛/露似珍珠月似弓<BR> ⑤.正是风轻荷媚处/恰逢花好月圆时<BR> ⑥.庙内无僧风扫地/寺中有客月临庭<BR> ⑦.千年古树当衣架/万里长江作浴盆<BR> ⑧.好古不求秦以下/游心常在物之初<BR> 属于第一种(平起)式的是1347&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于第二种(仄起)式的是2568&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于正格的是1356&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 属于变格的是&nbsp;2478&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<BR> 补充&nbsp;2.&nbsp;将下面出句按:平起正格和平起变格两种要求各对一句。<BR> 出句:山前岭后风梳柳&nbsp;<BR> 对句:木断桥连月照人&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;(平起正格)
2016-10-30 00:00
试分析如下对联五要素中的“词性相当,结构相称”这一条是如何体现的:<BR> 1.&nbsp;寂月眠云榻/孤松对水帘。<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;寂月&nbsp;孤松——-名词(主语)<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;眠&nbsp;对——-动词(谓语)<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;云榻&nbsp;水帘——名词(宾语)<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;音律:212/212<BR> 2.&nbsp;红杏枝头春意闹/乌衣巷口晚霞暄<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;红杏&nbsp;乌衣——颜色&nbsp;名词<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;枝头&nbsp;巷口——名词&nbsp;<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;红杏枝头&nbsp;乌衣巷口——主语<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;春意&nbsp;晚霞——时令名词&nbsp;宾语<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;闹&nbsp;暄——-动词&nbsp;&nbsp;谓语<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;音律:<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;红杏枝头/春意/闹//乌衣巷口/晚霞/暄<BR> 3.&nbsp;厚地高天,堪叹古今情不尽//痴男怨女,可怜风月债难酬<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;音律:<BR> 厚地高天,堪叹/古今/情/不尽//痴男怨女,可怜/风月/债/难酬<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;云尔老师,我的语文句式结构学的不好,具体分析句式时有困难。麻烦老师费心批改!谢谢!
2016-10-30 00:00
老师,对不起!作业一起补上。
2016-10-29 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">试分析如下对联五要素中的“词性相当,结构相称”这一条是如何体现的:</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 1.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">寂月眠云榻</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">孤松对水帘。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">这是同类对。(形容词:寂</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">孤</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">;名词:月</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">松</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">;动词:眠、对</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">;名词:云</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">水</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">;名词:榻</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">帘)</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——什么叫“同类对”?没这么说啊!辨别词性,还要弄清结构和音律音步!</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 2.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">红杏枝头春意闹</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">乌衣巷口晚霞暄</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">这是习惯对。颜色:红、乌</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">;名词:杏、衣;位置:枝头、巷口;名词:春意、晚霞;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——什么叫“习惯对”?您怎么这么说啊!辨别词性,还要弄清结构和音律音步!</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> 3.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">厚地高天,堪叹古今情不尽</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">//</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">痴男怨女,可怜风月债难酬</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"><br /> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">这是借对。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——??</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——您完全没听课也没看资料么??</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <table class="MsoTableGrid" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" style="border-collapse:collapse;border:none;"> <tbody> <tr> <td width="103" rowspan="2" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">12</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">号<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">学员<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">上次得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">第二次得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">累积得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> </tr> <tr> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">9/10</span></b> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">5/20</span></b> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">14/20</span></b> </p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:18pt;text-indent:-18pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;"></span></b> </p>
2016-10-29 00:00
老师,群中资料的名字叫诗词格律简介入门.txt
2016-10-29 00:00
<p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>我必须在正帖里回复你:</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>12号学员:</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 你也太粗心了!到现在不知道“</strong></span><span style="color:#E53333;"><b><span style="font-family:黑体;color:red;font-size:24px;"><strong>古韵学习教材(专用帖)</strong></span></b><span style="font-size:24px;"><strong></strong></span><span style="font-size:24px;"><strong>”在哪里:</strong></span></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>http://www.wenrenbang.com/blog.asp?wenzhangid=35473</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>(就在“网校”这个版面,不必到别处寻找啊!!)</strong></span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>讲课时给过了链接地址。你大概没有听课是吧?</strong><br /> </span> </p> <p> <span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;"><strong>难怪你完全没按要求做练习!</strong></span> </p>
2016-10-29 00:00
老师,资料中就有这些内容啊。我特意对着资料改的呀:(
2016-10-28 00:00
谢谢老师!
2016-10-28 00:00
试分析如下对联五要素中的“词性相当,结构相称”这一条是如何体现的:<BR> 1.&nbsp;寂月眠云榻/孤松对水帘。<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;这是同类对。(形容词:寂&nbsp;孤&nbsp;;名词:月&nbsp;松&nbsp;;动词:眠、对&nbsp;&nbsp;;名词:云&nbsp;水&nbsp;;名词:榻&nbsp;帘)<BR> 2.&nbsp;红杏枝头春意闹/乌衣巷口晚霞暄<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;这是习惯对。颜色:红、乌&nbsp;;名词:杏、衣;位置:枝头、巷口;名词:春意、晚霞;<BR> 3.&nbsp;厚地高天,堪叹古今情不尽//痴男怨女,可怜风月债难酬<BR> &nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;这是借对。<BR>
2016-10-21 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:18pt;text-indent:-18pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1.<span style="font-weight:normal;font-size:7pt;font-family:'Times New Roman';">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span></span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">一岭松风天放鹤</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">半山云雾洞藏仙。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0100011/1001100</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">2.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">向阳门第春常在</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">/</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">积善人家庆有余。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1001001/0100110<br /> 3.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">竹本无心,节外偏添枝叶</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">//</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">藕虽有孔,胸中不染尘埃</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0100</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">010001//1011</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">001100<br /> 4.&nbsp;</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">明月初临,夕阳乍隐,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">趁</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">恁好心情,请君同入潇湘梦</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0100</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0011</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">0</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1100</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">1001001 </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">“趁”是第四声,仄声。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"><br /> </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">春花正苒,时雨将</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">兴</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,凭斯新景致,偕</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">汝</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">共谐秦晋缘。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0011</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">010</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">1</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">00011</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">,</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">0</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;">0</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;">10010 </span></b><b><span style="font-size:16pt;font-family:宋体;">——</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">这里“兴起”的“兴”,是平声(“兴致”的“兴”才是仄声);“汝”是第三声,是仄声。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">——您做得很不错,只有三个字疏忽了。</span></b><b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;color:red;"></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">(另外:第4题的双斜杠位置用得不对。)</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:16.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;"></span></b> </p> <table class="MsoTableGrid" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0" style="border-collapse:collapse;border:none;"> <tbody> <tr> <td width="103" rowspan="2" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">12</span></b><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">号<span></span></span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;">学员<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">上次得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">第一次得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;">累积得分<span></span></span></b> </p> </td> </tr> <tr> <td width="168" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:blue;"></span></b> </p> </td> <td width="156" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">9/10</span></b> </p> </td> <td width="144" valign="top" style="border:solid windowtext 1.0pt;"> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">9/10</span></b> </p> </td> </tr> </tbody> </table> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="margin-left:18pt;text-indent:-18pt;"> <b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:fuchsia;"></span></b> </p>
2016-10-15 00:00
练习1:将下面对联标平仄(使用“0、1”符号按文中例):(读音以“新华字典”查得的今普通话读音为准)<BR> 1.&nbsp;一岭松风天放鹤/半山云雾洞藏仙。0100011/1001100<BR> 2.&nbsp;向阳门第春常在/积善人家庆有余。1001001/0100110<BR> 3.&nbsp;竹本无心,节外偏添枝叶//藕虽有孔,胸中不染尘埃0100,010001//1011,001100<BR> 4.&nbsp;明月初临,夕阳乍隐,趁恁好心情,请君同入潇湘梦//0100,0011,01100,1001001<BR> 春花正苒,时雨将兴,凭斯新景致,偕汝共谐秦晋缘。0011,0101,00011,0010010