鹊桥仙

一见如故头像

发布时间：2017-04-19 00:00

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鹊桥仙
           常相望情长
春风再度，飞花成客 ，香惹凡心一鹿。
两情相悦未一顾，念人去别思未诉。
严寒暑酷，关山日暮，唯梦悠悠无数。
此情常赋寄明月，暮鼓夜长风如故。

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2017-04-30 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:24px;font-family:宋体;color:#E53333;"><strong>鹊桥仙 秦观的么：</strong></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;"><span style="font-size:18px;"><strong> </strong></span></span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="background:white;"> <strong><b><span style="font-size:18px;">词例：［宋］秦观</span></b> </strong> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="background:white;"> <strong><span style="font-size:18px;">纤 云 弄 巧，飞 星 传 恨，银 汉 迢 迢 暗 度。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">◎ ○ ◎ ●，◎ ○ ◎ ●，◎ ● ◎ ○ ◎ ▲。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">金 风 玉 露 </span><span style="color:#E53333;font-size:18px;">一 相 逢</span><span style="font-size:18px;">，便 胜 却、人 间 无 数。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">◎ ○ ◎ ● </span><span style="color:#E53333;font-size:18px;">● ○ ○</span><span style="font-size:18px;">，● ◎ ●、○ ○ ◎ ▲。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">柔 情 似 水，佳 期 如 梦，忍 顾 鹊 桥 归 路。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">◎ ○ ◎ ●，◎ ○ ◎ ●，◎ ● ◎ ○ ◎ ▲。</span><span><br /> </span><span style="font-size:18px;">两 情 若 是 </span><span style="color:#E53333;font-size:18px;">久 长 时</span><span style="font-size:18px;">，又 岂 在、朝 朝 暮 暮。</span></strong> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left" style="background:white;"> <strong><span style="font-size:18px;">◎ ○ ◎ ●</span><span style="color:#E53333;font-size:18px;"> ● ○ ○，</span><span style="font-size:18px;">● ◎ ●、○ ○ ◎ ▲。</span></strong> </p> <p> <br /> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <strong><span style="font-size:24px;color:#E53333;">您的，第4、10句仍然是出律的。</span></strong> </p>
2017-04-28 00:00
<p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">——鹊桥仙，一般都是欧阳修体：您的第四、九句出律。</span></b> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">鹊桥仙</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">　</span><b><span style="font-family:宋体;color:red;">双调五十六字，前后段各五句，两仄韵</span></b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">　　　　　　　　　　　欧阳修</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;"> </span> </p> <p class="MsoNormal" align="left"> <span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">月波清霁</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">烟容明淡</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">读</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">灵汉旧期还至</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">鹊迎桥路接天津</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">映夹岸</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">读</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">星榆点缀</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">　　云屏未卷</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:#DEB698;"><br /> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Arial;">○○</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎◎</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">　　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○◎</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:#DEB698;"><br /> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">仙鸡催晓</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">肠断去年情味</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">多应天意不教长</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">句</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">恁恐把</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">读</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">欢娱容易</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:red;">韵</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;color:#DEB698;"><br /> </span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●●</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Arial;">○○</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">◎◎</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●</span><span style="font-size:9.0pt;font-family:宋体;color:#DEB698;">　</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:宋体;">⊙○⊙</span><span style="font-size:12.0pt;font-family:Tahoma;">●&nbsp;</span> </p>
2017-04-28 00:00
秦观的
2017-04-21 00:00
笔意清澈，参悟够深。
2017-04-19 00:00
又是一年春来到，花记心中成过客，尘缘未了，两情相顾，但是离别的思念却无法倾述。在日月轮回里，只能梦里相聚，思念常伴清风明月。【按语：赵淑敏】